好的英语作文，除了要做到：覆盖要点，层次分明，语言正确，逻辑条理，拼写正确，卷面整洁之外，还应该有亮点。就像夜空中的小星星，熠熠生辉，使得整篇文章生动有趣，彰显自己语言驾驭的能力。

一：开头结尾，力求新颖

1：疑问句开头：Do you know Hamlet? Have you read  the Merchant of Venice?(湖南考卷）

2：用祈使句抒发感叹（常用于结尾）：Just imagine,all this can be done with a cute mouse!(（江苏考卷）

3：引用谚语：Anyhow,different cultures,different customs.If you do as Romans do when in Rome,you will enjoy more of your stay here.

二：句有长短，运用得当

（摘自辽宁2010年满分作文）

最长句，33词：The main resposibilities of the advisor include helping

students to practise their oral English,answering the questions,and helping organize activities such as singing English songs,English evenings,or lectures on interesting topics.

最短句，5词：Fluency in Chinese is preferred.

三：结构复杂，彰显能力

As a child,I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could have whatever I wanted and do whatever I liked.

四：倒装省略，灵活运用

1：Seldom do we know what is happening both at home and abroad,let alone what we can do for our country.(陕西卷）

2：Among this 800-metre street,there are more than 300 shops.(全国卷）

3：I usually memorize 20 new words a day and put them to use whenever possible.(江苏卷）

五：比喻排比，修辞添彩

1：As everybody knows，vocabulary is an important part of language,just like bricks in a building.(江苏卷）

2:I like him because his comedies and tragedies bring me into a fantastic world;I love him because his poems let me enjoy the beauty of English language;I admire him because his keen sights set me thinking and teach me how to lead a meaningful life.(湖南卷）

六：善用连词，结构紧凑

1：Firstly...Secondly...Thirdly...Last but not least...(福建卷）

2：...However...In that case...Anyway...(湖北卷）

3：...Then...but...Later...Therefore...(湖北卷）

4：...In this way...What's more...Besides...Personally...(浙江卷）

七：避免重复，巧用近义

1：However ,if I had to give up one of them,I would turn off the TV rather than switch off my cell or cut off the internet.(安徽卷）

2： Now，I'd to make some suggestions on English teaching and learning in our school.Firstly we should be given ...Seconddly,I hope...Finally,I suggest...(江苏卷）

八：非谓结构，简洁传神

1：Deeply moved by her efforts,we tried our best and won the first prize in the concert.(浙江卷）

2：Around 540 million people are affected by second-hand smoke,causng 100,000 deaths a year.(广东卷）

九：词汇高级，展示水准

1：I could do without TV because few shows take my fancy and there too many commercials .Besides,most programs on TV are also available elsewhere.(安徽卷）

2：Upon their arrival,Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warmly welcomed.(浙江卷）

3：Currently ,China has about 350 million smokers.Statistics shows  China has approximately 350,000,000 smokers.(广东卷）

十：名习谚语，画龙点睛

Since "Life is a stage."We are actually all actors and actresses.On this stage,everyone has his own role to play and I will try my best to play my part well.（湖南卷）