1：高级词汇的使用：高级词汇是指那些大纲中没有列入识记要求，但是实际运用中出现比较频繁的词汇。例如：frustration,awkward,awfully,concern...等词，都是高级词汇。考生如果能够适当地运用高级词汇，一定会给评卷老师留下深刻印象。

a: I can't find any way to solve the problem.(换为高级词汇：I can't find any solution to the problem.)

b:The question is really difficult to understand.(换为高级词汇：The question is really confusing。）

c:He had to face all the possible difficulties.(换为高级词汇：He had to cope with all the possible difficulties.)

2:同义词的使用：英语中有些词的使用频率非常高，表达的时候大家都喜欢用。如果我们能够使用与之相应的同义词来代替，会给评卷的老师带来新鲜的感觉。

a: It will be very interesting.(换作同义词：It will be a lot of fun.)

b: Last summer I visited New Jersey with my parents.(换作同义词：Last year I toured New Jersey with my parents.)

3:适当利用短语代替单词：使用短语的难度要比单词大一些。所以，恰当地运用短语可以显示出作者的功力。

 a：Suddenly I had a good idea.变为：Suddenly I came up with a good idea. 

b:Everyone should do his or her best.变为：Everyone is supposed to do his or her best.

 (二）应用了较多的语法结构     

1：使用固定句式

a:She was robbed of her purse but she had no time to call for help.用before one can do something句型变为：She was robbed of her purse before she could call for help.

b: The environment will never improve until everybody takes care of it. 使用倒装结构变为：Not until everybody takes care of it will the environment improve.

2:使用分词：分词在句子中可以做伴随，原因状语，或者定语,可以使句子表达简洁生动。

a:Nowadays，we can easily travel from one place to another and this bridge the gap among diffrent races or cultures.变为分词短语：Nowadays we can easily travel from one place to another ，thus bridging the gap among diffrent races or cultures.

3:使用定语从句：定语从句的使用，不仅使得上下文更加流畅，同时可以展示出作者灵活运用较复杂的语法结构的能力。

a: My favorite living writer is Roddy Doyle. I think he is a genius.变为： My favorite living writer is Roddy Doyle， who I think he is a genius.

b: My aunt bought me a book.The title of the book is All about USA.变为：: My aunt bought me a book,whose title is All about USA.

（三）上下文的连贯性：书面表达应该注意上下文的连贯性，有效地使用连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。

1:连接性副词：可以起到承上启下的作用，使得文章整体上紧凑连贯。连接性副词：also,furthermore,inaddition,additionally,hopefullly,meanwhile,however,instead,in other words ,in brief,in a word,in my opinion,on the whole等等。

a:We have many things to do.We believe we can finish before the day is over.使用连接性副词变为：We have quite a lot to do.Hopefully,we will be able to finish before the day is over.

b:The boy comes from a poor family.The boy does well in his studies.The boy plans to work his way through college.变为：Even though he comes from a poor family,the boy does well in his studies;furthermore,he plans to work his way through college.

2:使用从属连词：after,as,when, as long as, as soon as等等。

a:You work hard and never give up.You will succeed in your studies.使用从属连词变为：So long as you work hard,you will succeed in your studies.

b: The teacher came in.The students were quiet.使用从属连词变为：The students were quiet as soon as the teacher came in.

（未完待续B)